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What happens when love dies?
When the angel cries?
When the stars go out?
When you hear the devil shout?

What happens when the heart is broken?
When hatred is outloud, spoken?
When the spell of death is cast?
When down and away falls the mask?

What happens when the soul is shattered?
When the bodies battered?
When the demons sing?
When the wounds all sting?

What happens when the men hit wives?
When children lose lives?
When bombs kill millions?
When hatred kills trillions?

What happens when humanity falls?
When hell calls?
When everything is nothing but darkness?
When we're all dismissed?
©2008-2009 ~fallenpoeticlover
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Not sure what to say about this one... just some random thinking and musing I suppose, just like alot of my other stuff I guess... I'm tired now though to so...well yea...

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let despair reign...

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+Humans are un-natural.....Freaks. Accept it+
Very deep...

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Be as loud as you can while in life, cause if you don't, no one will be able to hear you when you have left.

You are not a human being having a spiritual experience, but a spiritual being having a human experience.
thanks

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
thanks!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
yea...

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
I like this a lot.
Sounds like it could be put to music.
really? Cool!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
haha i can answer one of the questions... when hell calls, i answer. lol. i love this poem. really makes me think.

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why is it that children, more often than not, end up JUST like their parents? why is it that so many BAD parents have the MOST influence on the children

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