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A broken heart
A broken spirit
A broken soul
A broken girl...
What do you see in me?

A bad girlfriend
A bad lover
A bad best friend
A bad human being...
What is it that you see?

An ugly face
An ugly body
An ugly humor
An ugly person...
What makes you need me?

An empty mind
An empty heart
An empty love
An empty lover...
What makes me so good to you?

I'm a broken girl
I'm a bad human being
I'm an ugly person
I'm an empty lover...
What are you thinking?
What don't you get?
©2008-2009 ~fallenpoeticlover
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I don't get it, I have no idea what it is that people see in me and why they continue to try to tell me that there is more to me than what I know it there...

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*Bangs head repeadetly against a wall*

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Loving someone that doesn't love you is like reaching for a star - You know you'll never reach it but you just got to keep trying
what?

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
meh...

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
that poem gave me a headache >o< but it is a good representation of one's own low self-esteem.

but, seriously, don't think that way >o<

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ɵʘɵ Vates Dolor ɵʘɵ
ɵʘɵ Catulus Dolor ɵʘɵ
The Husky with the 3rd eye.
Great poem....

But I think you are a good person with a good heart, and not all of the stuff above. And you are a good poet too !! :hug:

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Great poem.. i can really relate to this at times... :sniff: But amazing, you capture emotions very well :D

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I love Patrick Hall more than we will ever know...
True love starts with a kiss.
DAMN IT!!!!! I lost a penny
everyone doubts themselves in some way, and no one can change theyre mind about it, and I'm not going to try to do that, I'm just going to tell you how I see it you don't have to listen
Thanks, :hug:

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????

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