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I lay beside you,
You're so unknowing
So unprepared
So naive
You think I love you
You think I won't kill you,
You, that which I love...

Watching you in darkness
Waiting for your breath to slow
Waiting for your dreams to come
Waiting for the deep deep sleep
Finally, you're ready
Reach out and touch your tender cheek
Reach out and feel the life in your skin

If my heart was beating,
It'd thump from my chest
If I had to breathe,
It'd be in gasps for this moment
Stroking your hair
Watching your face
Hearing your heartbeat
Almost tasting your blood

Hesitation...
Why? I don't love you
Why can't I bend over you
I've done it before...
So many before
Why are you different
Your hair in the moonlight...
Your skin in that silver glow
Why can't I bite you?

Frustration
Bend over you
Touch your neck with my lips
Taste that sweetness
Feel that blood
What is this?
Why can't I open my jaw?
Why can't I take you?
Why can't I drain you?

I swear I love you not
I swear I cannot care for you
I am a vampire...
You are my meal
What is this?
This weakness, this struggle
I lay back down again...
What have I become?
A vampire in love...
Who's heard of such a thing...?
©2008-2009 ~fallenpoeticlover
:iconfallenpoeticlover:

Author's Comments

Poor vampire... He's so oblivious to the fact that he can sooo fall in love!

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:iconfenfen321:
Very neat poem! I can see this becoming a story... :P *+fav* ^^

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Be as loud as you can while in life, cause if you don't, no one will be able to hear you when you have left.

You are not a human being having a spiritual experience, but a spiritual being having a human experience.
:iconochae7:
*gasp* yes story! story! :heart: i always loved the idea of a vampire falling in love!

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"And thus, with a kiss I die" :heart:
:iconfenfen321:
*gives you oxygen tank* yes, it would be very cool :3

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Be as loud as you can while in life, cause if you don't, no one will be able to hear you when you have left.

You are not a human being having a spiritual experience, but a spiritual being having a human experience.
:iconochae7:
oxygen tank? XD thanks, hehe

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"And thus, with a kiss I die" :heart:
:iconitami112360:
I agree ...a story would be great for this poem... maybe a one shot.. ^^

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A kiss blown is a kiss wasted... so open your mouth and french someone!! ~Moi


It all started with a chair... ~Juno, Juno


~*~:heart: Viva la Yaoi!!:heart:~*~
:iconbouncybouncegirl:
omg i love it i just kinda stared at the screen for a minute lol
:iconmandyc:
TWLIGHT!!!! But Edward could NEVER hurt Bella. lol, but that is VAMPIRE DIARIES!!! Not Stefan but DAMON!!! THIS IS SOOOOOO DAMON!!! He wants to kill her but can't because he is in love with her!!! omg!! (lol srry long comment but I had a moment there...) :blush: AWESOME! :+fav: :heart: :love:

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I love Patrick Hall! MUHAHHHH!
It is amazing what you can learn when you easedrop!
Love hurts.
:iconsliktor:
lovely :) in avampiric sort of way :P

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Sapere Aude ~ Dare to be wise
:iconfenfen321:
For that gasping, you know :p

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Be as loud as you can while in life, cause if you don't, no one will be able to hear you when you have left.

You are not a human being having a spiritual experience, but a spiritual being having a human experience.
:iconinfinityontherun:
Reminds me of Twilight. ;D
I think it'd sound better as "You are my PREY" instead of "You are my meal" But that's a personal opinion. ^^

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and her laugh always sounds like the clatter of shaken dice,
of the rotation of roulettes and a life on the line.

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