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Strong
A word I didn't know the meaning of
Not until you held me in your arms
Not until I felt your breath on my face
And the beat of your heart in my ear

Strong
A word that had no meaning
'Til I saw the mask you wear shatter
And for once I saw the person that was inside
A person with weakness but so much more strength

Strong
A word without meaning
Until you wiped away my tears
Until you let me cry as you held me tight
Until I sobbed into your chest only to have you pull me back together

Strong
You are my strength
You are my power
You are my weakness
You are my everything

For you I will be strong
Alright this is being written like now I mean for once I don't have it copied into a notebook so that I can then copy it onto the computer. This is just off the top of my head throught of after a few recent events of this weekend.... The person that it's for.. Well he'll never see it... well maybe he will time will be the answer to that...

Comment and Critique please

And is it me or is this my first poem in a really long while?
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PawsforHead Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beatuiful, reminds me of the relationship I'm in right now :) You've got talent my friend.
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xxBlackRosesRedxx Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
This beautiful, I love the emotion behind it, excellent job

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harpyeagle45 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
Awesome! After I read it as a poem, I went back and read it as a song. It works perfectly! A little short for a full song, but this is GREAT!!! :squee:
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orderedXdisorder Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008
i love this,
it's very poetic.
i really can't think of any critic it would require.
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fallenpoeticlover Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2008
thanks alot!!
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xhalfxemptyxbloodx Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
*sigh*

i really have no idea why i'm still awake right now.
i probably forgot to say this before, but i do like this poem.
it just has a certain.. sense to it. the importance of it or something. i really don't know. i'm half- conscious, yet i continue to type. :ohmygod:
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fallenpoeticlover Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2007
Go to bed hun before you like fall over and hurt yourself or something
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a-forsaken-angel Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
awww very cute and sad at the same time
very very good no critique needed, it's beautiful
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fallenpoeticlover Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007
Thank you... I ended up giving it to the person that inspired it... he just looked at it and smiled before tucking it away in a pocket... it was so strange...
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a-forsaken-angel Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwwww how sweet
he liked it if he did that (obviously)
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