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There's a recipe for poetry
Not just a jumble of words
Not just a tumble of emotions
Not just anything and everything
Not just a silly rhyme

There's a recipe for poetry
And it goes something like this
Take a pinch of heartbreak
Take a bit of hurt
Take a silly smile
And take an unconditional love

Mix in a long, dark night
Add maybe a drunken fight
An optional break up
Perhaps a small, romantic make up
A dozen long stem roses
A few touching whispers

Maybe a few drops of blood
Some emotions always good
A little bit of angst
A few small high school pranks
Then a heart breaking goodbye

Mix it all together
Let it simmer, let it boil
Let it sit and stew
Let it warp and grow
Let it become what it will
Let it cook until tender

Then let it all out
Out onto the paper
Onto the keyboard
Out onto anything
Let it out of yourself
Out of your heart
The depths of your soul

Mix in anything and everything
A moral and a story
A bit of flow
And a pitch of time
Maybe just maybe a small small rhyme

But never forget before you say done
Take one last look
One last glance adn add a bit of yourself
Something that makes it true
True for your life, true for you
Then you're done

Then the recipe for poetry is done
©2007-2009 ~fallenpoeticlover
:iconfallenpoeticlover:

Author's Comments

Not really sure where this came from, I was just thinking about recipes or something and the wrods, 'Recipe for poetry' popped into my head... I love the way it came out don't get me wrong though it makes me giggle honestly...


Comment and Critique please. I know it's not perfect and there are parts of it that seem a bit off so please comment if you can think of a way to make it better! I'd love to hear suggestions!

OH AND THIS IS 900!!!

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:icondamnedlostsoul:
wow... brilliant...

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in the midst of a thousand drops of red, a howl was heard from his beaten wrists...

insanity has set in...

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What being jobless means..
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
Thanks!!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:iconalchemicdragon13:
Wonderful! x3

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Member of the Secret Society of Tuesday ~
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
Really, you like it?

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:iconalchemicdragon13:
Yes ^^ I love it. Very creative and different

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Member of the Secret Society of Tuesday ~
:icondarknessaroundu:
haha congrats on your 900th little sister :hug:

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wakiagaru kansei was yuuki to naru tachiagareba ima ijou kurushimi tomonau sore demo saigo wa kitto warau subete sarau shouri no kansei
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
Thanks!! :giggle: I'm so happy!! I didn't realize how much prose and other things I had posted though cause I just finished copying my poems into my notebook and I currently have 637 of those and 900 devs it's like O..o

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
Thank you!! :giggle:

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:icondarknessaroundu:
Haha wow thats unusual eh? But still its good to know that you are that high up there :D :hug: Congrats.

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wakiagaru kansei was yuuki to naru tachiagareba ima ijou kurushimi tomonau sore demo saigo wa kitto warau subete sarau shouri no kansei
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
That's true adn it's not like the rest of the 900 are like stupid pictures of myself or something like that, I mean most of them are hard work made chapters of stories and that kind of thing if they're not poems so yea. I'm just happy I made 900 it's like *squeals*

Now to just get to 20,000 page views or 1000 devs... Those are my two next goals.

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????

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