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I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
So much for a break in the love poems... I like this one though I find it so sweet and it's the truth if only I could hold the person that I was in love with...
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:iconsofflan:
that was really beautiful, it had a nice flow and I couldn't stop reading. It was truly amazing!
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:iconkyta-satora:
Omg
I was thinking [PROTOCREED] when I saw this
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Mood: Love ~UntamedRayne 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!It' beautiful :)
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~Zelda85044 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
INCREDIBLE!!! Nothing short of it! :)

*faves*

Love in Christ, :+favlove:
Zelda
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=LadyRainAshni 5 days ago  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel the exact same way about a man I love. But unfortunately he's with another girl.....
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~Fuzz-ball2 May 18, 2013  New member Hobbyist Artist
Nice! Check this [link]
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:iconmomiji-chan86:
i love this, how do you post poems tho?
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~KattyShouto May 15, 2013  New member
I really like this poem. You did a good job!!!!!
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:iconmarisol624:
Make me cry... 😢
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Mood: Longing ~xThatWhatSheSaidLOLx May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful. :) If my love ever sees this....although we may be far apart and distance, that doesn't dwindle my love for you. <3 I dedicate this to him. ^////^
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