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Finally Falling All the years that have passed
All the love that you've had
All the times I've turned you down
All the times I've made you sad

Laying here in your arms
Rethinking all that's come to pass
Laying here in your arms
God I hope this moment lasts

Every no I had to give you
Every turn down you had to get
Every chance you wanted to take
Every time you took this bet

Laying in your arms
Half asleep and falling
Laying in your arms
Out to you my heart is calling

After all the times we've been down this road
After all the ups and downs
After all the things I've said to you
After all the smiles and the frowns

Laying here in your arms
I
Open to You Pound upon my window
Knock upon my door
I'll open up my heart to you
I'll open it once more

Catch me when I'm falling
Catch me when I hit
Hold me in your arms
Don't put me through any shit

Tell me that you love me
Tell me that I'm your night sky
Tell me that you need me
Tell me that you don't know why

Be there when I need you
I'll be there just to call
Be there to be my everything
I'll be there to be your all

So pound upon my window
Knock upon my door
I'm opening my heart to you
It's now open just once more...
The True You A grasp upon my sleeve
A yank upon my heart
A stumble and a fall
A catch and a call

A whimper from your lips
A plead from your finger tips
A silent need in your eyes
A part of you that never lies

A need that says you need some help
A want that says you want to change
A simple thing to reach out and catch you
A simple thing to do what I've always wanted to do

Hold you close to my chest
Cradle you to my breast
You're safe here in my arms
I'll protect you from evil harms

Amazing to be helping now
My dream to be your savior
Protect you now and forever
Your bad habits, mine to severe

As this dream comes true
As I do what I wan
Keep Moving The wind blows
The earth turns
The people speak
The people bleed
The world moves on

The music plays
The year goes by
The days change
The snow falls
The world keeps going

The human moves
The human breathes
The human lives
The human keeps on
The world survives

Everything the same
Everything still spinning
Everything still working
Everything still going
The world is still whole

But you're gone...
But I'm gone without you
The Story of One I watch the words fall from your lips
Tumbling out
Such a glorious stream
Such a glorious waterfall
Such poetic rhythm
Such a way with words

I watch the emotions liquify in your eyes
Deep pools
Such beautiful oceans
Such beautiful rivers
Such power
Such a way with your feelings

I watch the love drip from your finger tips
Oozing forward
Such a fabulous trickle
Such a fabulous rainbow of love
Such a steadfast feeling
Such a way with your heart

I watch you in this time of need
Watch you struggle for something
Such desperation in your grip
Such desperation in your clinging
Such a desire to succeed
Such a way with your hopes
What Have I Become? The smoke tearing at my mind
The haze pulling at my consciousness
The needles shredding apart my skin
The need draining me of life
The want stabbing at my personality
Is this what I've become?

The dry thirst ruling my life
The pulsing desire ripping me to shreds
The unquenchable thirst for that which will kill me
The undesirable temptation calling me to bed
The unsedatable rapture that captures every little fly
Is this what I've become?

Another fly trapped in this web
Another moth drawn to this fake light
Another bee pulled toward this fake flower of my demise
Another spider in this web of lies
Another trapped soul so lost in

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by ~fallenpoeticlover

I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
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So much for a break in the love poems... I like this one though I find it so sweet and it's the truth if only I could hold the person that I was in love with...
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Mood: Joy ~koolkika 2 days ago
well guess what, i love this! haha

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look after my heart, i've left it with you

~edward cullen~
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Mood: Love ~TwiUnderSeeker 6 days ago
Beautiful.
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~teratabitha 6 days ago
this is really good.
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Mood: Sadness ~darknessoverme666 May 13, 2012  New member
This is my favorite. I love it! The repetition and simplicity are part of the lure. It perfectly capture the emotions of someone who has been without their Soulmate for,too long, and the feelings brought up as they anticipate being reunited. If only............
I forget what she sounds llike.
I foregt what she smells like
I forget what she tastes like
I forget what its llike to cuddle with her.
Its been too long and I am worried she is never coming back
and won't be able to remember anything about her

I miss her so much
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~SugarHeartedGirl May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
In my humble opinion, which you can either ignore or respond to, this poem is too repetitive and simple. The sentences are all simple, and the repetition of "I love it" is very dull to me, as well as the beginnings of the lines and the second to last stanza. That's what I think, please don't be angry because I think this should not be one of the top poems in the literature category.

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Bowties are cool.
If you live for a hundred years, I want to live for a hundred years minus one day so I'll never have to be without you. ~Winnie The Pooh.
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Mood: Love ~Piineapples May 5, 2012
I love this poem! This is so true. All of it,
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~Garrett-Jax Apr 24, 2012  New member
That is a nice one, as to holding the person. . .about seventeen years is my best. . .though it reminds me of an old saying in sword work but it could be applied to a love as well.
'Hold the sword (your love) like a bird,
hold too tight you kill it,
hold too loose it will fly away,
hold firm with confidence and
it will serve you well.'
Ok that's my philosophy for the day ;>P

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'If you are unable to say something simply you don't know it well enough. ~

Imagination is more important than knowledge.~

A theory is more impressive the simpler are it's concepts and the more things to which it pertains'

~Albert Einstein
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Mood: Love Dazed ~ILOVEUHEARTHEART Apr 24, 2012  New member
OMG this is just beautiful...

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"Do what makes you happy.
Be with who makes you smile.
Laugh as much as you breathe.
Love as long as you live." <3
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~Fangs2Go Apr 22, 2012
Adorable, I <3 it ^^
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~alisonna Apr 18, 2012
This isn't talent. Homer, Dickinson... That's talent.
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Escaping Time Time consumes art
Time consumes passion
So little time to create
So little time to breathe
So much homework
So much responsibility
I can't escape it

Time consumes writing
Time consumes my future
So little time to relax
So little time to find myself
So much weight
So much work to do
I can't escape it

Time consumes life
Time consumes love
So little time to dream
So little time to wish
So much running
So much stress
I can't escape it

I had a passion once
I had a dream
I had a purpose once
I had a goal
I had time once
I had my time consumed

Time consumes all
Time consumes me
So little time to be
So little time to me
Escaping Time by ~fallenpoeticlover
When Monsters Panic... by ~fallenpoeticlover
Once Upon a Fairytail Once upon a time...
Your spark set me on fire
Your eyes burned straight to my soul
Your appearance was nothing but a shell
Your heart was the kindred to my own

Once upon a time...
I wanted to rip the stars down for you
I believed you and I were everything
I knew that I could not breathe without you
I realized that everything before you was a mask

Once upon a time...
You ran away, afraid of me
You hid behind angry words and false pretenses
You blindly pushed and shoved me out
You fortefied yourself where I could not reach

Once upon a time...
I wished those walls away
I wanted nothing but to hear your voice
I longed for nothinOnce Upon a Fairytail by ~fallenpoeticlover
Wish I May I wish I may
I wish I might
Forget you just for tonight

I wish I may
I wish I might
Dream of someone else tonight

I wish I may
I wish I might
Feel my love returned tonight

I wish I may
I wish I might
Gain the love I'm worth tonight

I wish I may
I wish I might
Simply be at peace tonight

I wish I may
I wish I might
Just for once have a wish come true...
TonightWish I May by ~fallenpoeticlover
Remember the day Do you remember that day I stood in the rain
Alone and cold
Waiting for something
Waiting for someone

Do you remember that day I stood in the rain
You came up behind me
Wrapped me in warmth
Wrapped me in your arms

Do you remember that day I stood in the rain
You covered my head
Kissed my cheek
Kissed my tears away

Do you remember that day I stood in the rain
Then you were there
Then the clouds departed
Then everything was perfect

Do you remember that day I stood in the rain
Do you remember that day I stood in the sun
Do you remember that day I stood with you
Do you remember that day everything was perfectRemember the day by ~fallenpoeticlover
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