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I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
So much for a break in the love poems... I like this one though I find it so sweet and it's the truth if only I could hold the person that I was in love with...
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Simbalonso Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Great job!

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Si1v3r-P3ArL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
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ShadowIsStillAlive Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My boyfriend's been away for almost a week now, I always have to read wonderful poems like this to get me through points when he's gone.

I hope you can hold your lover soon, too.
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Ashantiangel Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This captures thoughts and idea's I'd never had a hope of expressing....thank you
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luckykitten123 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
So true and amazingly written 
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Angelofmusic21 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the feels!!!!! excellent job.   kaomoji set 2 60/67 
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dardasonet Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazingly written.
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TheOneandOnlyPLAP Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Student Filmographer
This is so beautiful....
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SmexySam Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
This is beautiful. I totally loved it. As I was reading it, I was imagining it bit by bit. That's how you know when it's a good poem. Again, beautiful. ^^
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