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I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
©2006-2009 ~fallenpoeticlover
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So much for a break in the love poems... I like this one though I find it so sweet and it's the truth if only I could hold the person that I was in love with...
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i think it would have been better without all the shompoo and toothpaste. too much detail!!

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"Every great wizard started out as nothing more than what we are now.......if they can do it, why not us?" ~~Harry Potter
okay then. I needed the deatil to make the poem a fixed pattern I know it's not my best work but i like it all the same

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
well wateva works for you. that's just my opinion

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"Every great wizard started out as nothing more than what we are now.......if they can do it, why not us?" ~~Harry Potter
i don't care aobut your opinion it's stupid! jk jk

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
well...ur stupid!!!

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"Every great wizard started out as nothing more than what we are now.......if they can do it, why not us?" ~~Harry Potter
oh thanks!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
way 2 much detail.... way 2 much.

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uh..............hi!!
it's suppose to be detailed

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
well sorry but yeah know some things dont need to be detailed that damn much.

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uh..............hi!!
it's your opinion i guess thanks for reading the poem though!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????

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