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I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
So much for a break in the love poems... I like this one though I find it so sweet and it's the truth if only I could hold the person that I was in love with...
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josewtf01 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Writer
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ShadowIsStillAlive Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My boyfriend's been away for almost a week now, I always have to read wonderful poems like this to get me through points when he's gone.

I hope you can hold your lover soon, too.
Ashantiangel Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This captures thoughts and idea's I'd never had a hope of expressing....thank you
luckykitten123 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
So true and amazingly written 
Angelofmusic21 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the feels!!!!! excellent job.   kaomoji set 2 60/67 
dardasonet Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazingly written.
TheOneandOnlyPLAP Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Student Filmographer
This is so beautiful....
SmexySam Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
This is beautiful. I totally loved it. As I was reading it, I was imagining it bit by bit. That's how you know when it's a good poem. Again, beautiful. ^^
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