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I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
©2006-2009 ~fallenpoeticlover
:iconfallenpoeticlover:

Author's Comments

So much for a break in the love poems... I like this one though I find it so sweet and it's the truth if only I could hold the person that I was in love with...

Comments


:iconalchemistprincess:
i think it would have been better without all the shompoo and toothpaste. too much detail!!

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"Every great wizard started out as nothing more than what we are now.......if they can do it, why not us?" ~~Harry Potter
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
okay then. I needed the deatil to make the poem a fixed pattern I know it's not my best work but i like it all the same

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:iconalchemistprincess:
well wateva works for you. that's just my opinion

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"Every great wizard started out as nothing more than what we are now.......if they can do it, why not us?" ~~Harry Potter
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
i don't care aobut your opinion it's stupid! jk jk

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:iconalchemistprincess:
well...ur stupid!!!

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"Every great wizard started out as nothing more than what we are now.......if they can do it, why not us?" ~~Harry Potter
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
oh thanks!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:iconbloodytemptation07:
way 2 much detail.... way 2 much.

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uh..............hi!!
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
it's suppose to be detailed

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:iconbloodytemptation07:
well sorry but yeah know some things dont need to be detailed that damn much.

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uh..............hi!!
:iconfallenpoeticlover:
it's your opinion i guess thanks for reading the poem though!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????

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