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I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
So much for a break in the love poems... I like this one though I find it so sweet and it's the truth if only I could hold the person that I was in love with...
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TheOneandOnlyPLAP 4 days ago  Student Filmographer
This is so beautiful....
SmexySam Mar 11, 2014  New member
This is beautiful. I totally loved it. As I was reading it, I was imagining it bit by bit. That's how you know when it's a good poem. Again, beautiful. ^^
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AshleySnape Jan 3, 2014  Student Interface Designer
It's a lovely and beautiful pome. It touch me totally. When I image how I get on with my lover, the scenes which descripted by the pome come forth my mind. I really want to find my lover who I haven't came across.
aintgonnawork Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is really good... i love reading it...Clap tnx for makeing me feel buterflys in my tumy...Here's a kiss for you, my love! 
IZZAME123 Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
These would be good lyrics to a song
I liked it. I thought it was nice.
Backwoodsborn Dec 27, 2013  Student Photographer
I love it. It was cute. :) I did see some typos, but it was still readable. Great Job!!
thecookiemomma Dec 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Very evocative. I like it.  It has a rhythm to it, a progression through the senses that ... makes sense. :D (Big Grin) 
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