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I feel your hands in my hair.
I feel your breath on my neck.
I feel your body pressed so close to mine.
I feel your lips on my throat.
I feel your hands move to my back and your lips work their way up to mine.
I feel you and I love it.

I hear you say you love me.
I hear you whisper my name.
I hear you tell me I'm the only one for you.
I hear your breath in my ear.
I hear your soft snores as I fall asleep.
I hear you and I love it.

I see you as I run into your arms.
I see your face break through my world of darkness.
I see you fight away my fears.
I see you wipe away my tears.
I see you're in love with me.
I see you and I love it.

I taste your lips.
I taste your tongue.
I taste your throat as I kiss it.
I taste your love.
I taste your passion.
I taste you and I love it.

I smell your colone as I hold you.
I smell your shampoo as I hug you.
I smell your toothpaste as I kiss you.
I smell your excitement as you cuddle me.
I smell the smell I've been waiting so long to smell.
I smell you and I love it.

I feel you.
I hear you.
I see you.
I taste you.
I smell you.
I do all these things and I love it.

I'm finally with you.
You're finally here.
I love it.
I love you.
So much for a break in the love poems... I like this one though I find it so sweet and it's the truth if only I could hold the person that I was in love with...
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:iconleviathansslave:
leviathansslave Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2016  New Deviant
That was simply beautiful. Thank you!
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SnapWest Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2016
where did you get this from?
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fallenpoeticlover Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
What do you mean where did I get it from???
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:iconsnapwest:
SnapWest Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016
i mean did you write this or did you cop paste it from a website?
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:iconfallenpoeticlover:
fallenpoeticlover Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016
I wrote it! Why in the world would I copy and paste it claiming it was my own?
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SnapWest Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016
well it is really well written! 
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fallenpoeticlover Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016
Well thank you. I appreciate it!
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:iconsnapwest:
SnapWest Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016
No problem!
I think it would sound pretty cool set to a small beat.
do u mine if i made an instrumental and then send u the link?
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NightCat97 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
,
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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Staby-McStabberz Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it was pretty good that you put that shampoo thing and the toothpaste thing in there because it's not cliche. It makes the character seem more human like "oh, I can smell the toothpaste, interesting."
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dixiedukes Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2015
This is beautiful words....ignore jealousy
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RoseOfTheNight4444 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
not much for tongue but THATS JUST ME love this :)
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methnomore Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015
good job look forward to reading more and I hope your stil post
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MsMysterousLady Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  Student General Artist
This poem is so sweet~! ^w^ *thumbs up* Good job, friend~! ^w^
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GamerBiscuit Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Came across this today. Such a lovely and wonderful poem. Thank you. 
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HaiXD Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this poem.. It is very fabulous...
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KrazyRock Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Student Photographer
i hope one day a girl gonna say this to me :(
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FreeSpiritCurlyHair Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015
So detailed. So loving. Wowzah.
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Dashieandluna Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Student General Artist
Aww
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slutsky11 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
cunt
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SeasideShores Featured By Owner May 27, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
WTF is up with you? Didn't get the morning coffee?
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slutsky11 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015
Your match.com profile is amusing-whrere we met 10 yrs ago.  Honest. Genuine. Happy. Positive. Thoughtful. Kind?   Ha, ha,ha, Black widow trying to snare another.  After 7 yrs,let me give the accurate adjectives- liar, multiple personality disorder, whore, swinger, depressed, deceitful, creul.  Full disclosure could have save me 7 yrs of hell.  You wont meet anyone . I will make sure they know what you are I will see to that.  you wont do the same you did to me. Bitch

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slutsky11 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
Yes. It's quite moving, and romantic.  On the surface. Only thing is, it's missing the most important ingredient. The guts to act on the empty words. In the end, it's meaningless
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Lugia20711 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Student Writer
I love this! Love 
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WolfdogTheKiller Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Adorable <3
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CaldoRosa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
well done
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NearCore Featured By Owner Edited Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful
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ThorTaco Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Student Artist
this is amazingly written uvu
and gosh, i know how you feel unu
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DarkFireHeart62 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student Artist
I love it :iconhorseiloveitplz:
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love4rockingout Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
I see this poem and I love it
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firekittenx9 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
he
said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
he
said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and
............once
again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f......ace the...
... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said.... You're not pretty
you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
♥♥ ~~THE END~~ ♥♥.......Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15
pages in 15 minutes, you're safe
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HaiXD Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg love it ;U;
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Dashieandluna Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Student General Artist
Will this actually happen?
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Simbalonso Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Great job!

:clap:
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josewtf01 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Writer
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Si1v3r-P3ArL Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
:happybounce: 
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ShadowIsStillAlive Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My boyfriend's been away for almost a week now, I always have to read wonderful poems like this to get me through points when he's gone.

I hope you can hold your lover soon, too.
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Ashantiangel Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This captures thoughts and idea's I'd never had a hope of expressing....thank you
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luckykitten123 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Student General Artist
So true and amazingly written 
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Angelofmusic21 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the feels!!!!! excellent job.   kaomoji set 2 60/67 
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dardasonet Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazingly written.
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TheOneandOnlyPLAP Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Student General Artist
This is so beautiful....
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SmexySam Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
This is beautiful. I totally loved it. As I was reading it, I was imagining it bit by bit. That's how you know when it's a good poem. Again, beautiful. ^^
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AshleySnape Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Interface Designer
It's a lovely and beautiful pome. It touch me totally. When I image how I get on with my lover, the scenes which descripted by the pome come forth my mind. I really want to find my lover who I haven't came across.
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aintgonnawork Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is really good... i love reading it...Clap tnx for makeing me feel buterflys in my tumy...Here's a kiss for you, my love! 
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IZZAME123 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
These would be good lyrics to a song
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animecrazed2460 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
I liked it. I thought it was nice.
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Backwoodsborn Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Photographer
I love it. It was cute. :) I did see some typos, but it was still readable. Great Job!!
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