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It's insanity
I'm losing myself in your eyes
I'm losing myself in your lies
I'm losing myself in your touch
I'm losing myself, I'm sure of that much

It's insanity
I can't believe I'm going insane
Everything to lose, nothing to gain
I'm falling for your lovely spell
My mind is not well

It's insanity
I'm falling so hard for you
Nothing that I can do
Not that I really want to
I just want this love to be true

It's insanity
I can't believe what is being lost
This love is at such a cost
But I can't help it
I can't help fall for your shit

It's insanity
All the lies
All the second tries
All the love I have for you
All the crap you put me through

It's insanity
Love is not but insanity
Love is not but tragedy
This love that tears me apart
I should have known from the start

It's insanity
©2007-2009 ~fallenpoeticlover
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Alright well I ahve a list of words that some of you might have seen on my page in my comments, they are a list for a sort of summer project thing that's going around DA. It's suppose to be pictures and drawings and not Lit but I'm using the words for lit purposes. This is inspired by the word Insanity...

comment and critique please!!
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Oh! Insanity, such a lovely word with so many meanings. My 9 to 5 job consists of working with the mentally ill. Some truly serious cases. If you get a chance read "Who's Crazy" in my Gallery. It describes a kind of Love Insanity. As always I love your work.

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Sometimes as writers we worry too much about creating a masterpiece when we should just be thankful the words flow at all.
I'm glad that you like it and I'll be sure to go check it out. As for working with the mentally ill... how is that? I mean i've always wondered about a carreer like that.

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
At times it is quite rewarding, and it is always interesting. You have to try to keep your worlds separate though. Burn out is a big problem for people in my field.

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Sometimes as writers we worry too much about creating a masterpiece when we should just be thankful the words flow at all.
Yea... I always thought that it would be a great way to learn... I love to watch people, learn about them, learn from them and that sort of thing... Though the seperating part would be where I would fail. I mean I get emotionally involved really easily...

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
Insanity could be described as insanity itself or an insanity of anything else, in this case, love. I love it. ^^ You have an excellent rhyming scheme and it all flows perfectly. ^^

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I :heart:....
:damphyr:Zaclonius: "Hakuna Matata."
I adopted a Jigen Daisuke chibi from The-Den

:iconmansionfans: < When the crypt doors creek...

:iconbishies-r-us: < Awesome!
Thank you so much!! :glomp: ness!!! :giggle: Thanks for reading as well as commenting and thank you expecially for the favs!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
Anytime ^^
YAY FOR :glomp: NESS! :D

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I :heart:....
:damphyr:Zaclonius: "Hakuna Matata."
I adopted a Jigen Daisuke chibi from The-Den

:iconmansionfans: < When the crypt doors creek...

:iconbishies-r-us: < Awesome!
:giggle: Finally someone who doesn't give a strange look for the word glompness... :giggle:

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
Glompness is awesome!
Same when you add 'age' to the end of words like 'gaspage' ^^

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I :heart:....
:damphyr:Zaclonius: "Hakuna Matata."
I adopted a Jigen Daisuke chibi from The-Den

:iconmansionfans: < When the crypt doors creek...

:iconbishies-r-us: < Awesome!

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