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Death I taste your kiss

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The sight of you takes the ability to see from my eyes.
The sound of your voice takes the ability to hear from my ears.
The touch of your fingertips takes the strength and the beat from my heart.
The taste of your kiss takes the very breath from my lungs.
What are you?
Who are you?
You're death.
You're my death.
Here to take me away.
I see you and lose sight of all else.
I hear you and I go deaf to everyone living.
I feel your touch and my heart stops beating.
Last I taste your kiss and you steal my breath.
You empty my waiting lungs with your gentle kiss.
You're death.
You're my death.
And I've fallen in love with you.
I fell in love with death.
And only to him do I give my last breath.
You know at first I got a bit annoyed with having to resubmit everything but it gives me a chance to rewrite it a bit and see if I can improve it. So really thank you Dani for deleteing them. This is a sad piece wrtten a long while back but looking at it now I really like the way it turned out.
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